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I'm not particular adept to using cameras, and I'm honestly in the dark when it comes to the majority of the technical aspect of photography and editing. I am however an enjoyer of art, as I always have been and as I always will be, and this very simply styled, but beautiful piece has brightened the better part of my day of viewing, as any wonderful piece should.
As this is a critique I suppose I should attempt to find something that would help you improve. I could have easily posted this in the comments section had I not planned to give my best attempt at refining you somehow.
I think that this deviation may have been more appealing to some people with a a little more colour. As much as that's already over said, I do feel it could have made a big difference for the piece, but only because of it's subject matter. The slight yellow of a pear and the eventual browning that should have happened naturally would have added to the human feel that this naked pair gives off.
Thank you for capturing such a wonderful shot, I will immediately head off to your gallery to see the rest of your works. Keep up the great effort. I will do my best to follow your inevitable success.
Also nice to see it in B&W, makes it more surreal. I'm wondering if I miss some shadows, the light is very soft now. Would like to see another version, but perhaps you've already done that.
I also wonder if the picture would improve if the background had some colour, giving a bit of contrast between the object and its background.
Still, a very nice picture.
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